Amusing read. The one thing that broke the suspension of disbelief was the Velociraptor reference, which was based off of a movie and not history (God would know the difference).
I frequently refrain from nitpicking when dealing with children ("yes, the internet is how robots talk to each other"). It wouldn't be too much to expect an omnipotent being to do so as well.
http://dinosaurs.about.com/od/dinosaurbasics/a/velofacts.htm : "There's no evidence that Velociraptor hunted in packs" and "Velociraptor wasn't the smartest dinosaur of the Cretaceous period"